You'd never say that the editors
of The Economist write heart-rending
prose, but yet they can do something to hearts.
"Is it because America and
Europe have tired of their own wars that they have started to turn their backs
on other people's?" one asks this week in a leader. "The number of dead in Syria has
passed 30,000 and some days 250 bodies are added to the pile."
See the bodies, see them in a
pile, see it growing, and growing, and growing — unless you do something? Images. Not as vivid as TV images, but still images. The writer didn't have to give us that
pile. Nor what comes next, a
hypothesized picture of "Syria's great cities ... ground to rubble"
in a future where "the whole Middle East would choke on dust."
He tells us that the dictator
Assad's assault is against "civilians" (not "rebels") and
the violence of it "breeds implacable hatred, and so the rebels [has to be
"rebels" now; "civilians" doesn't fit the final verb] will
fight on." If Assad weren't
so violent the rebels wouldn't fight
on? "Let's quit; he's just
arresting us"? The nouns are
ticklish but that connective ("and so") is downright painful. Painful to one accustomed to The Economist's care with cause and
effect, that is.
Their care is to avoid the vague
and wishful, and yet that "and so" is wishful. So is much that is said to show that
intervention is "feasible."
"It is possible" that the "mere threat" of a no-fly
zone would "keep Mr. Assad's planes on the ground." So is the word "probably" in
this sentence about the behavior of other Arab countries: "So long as there is no invading
ground force (and there won't be), they will probably fall into
line." How confident that
"and there won't be" is.
I think of earlier confidence: "Bombing will do the job. Surgical strikes."
But, in light of the whole
editorial, that must be a slip. Economist caution, Economist cool, prevails.
The writer knows that "intervention is a slippery slope," that
"nobody can be sure who would replace [Assad]." He does "not call lightly for the
world to undertake such a risky operation."
Maybe the coolest reason that
journals can now offer for action in any region is that somebody is
"destabilizing" it. With
the rest of them The Economist
assumes that stability is good, and in a State Department way. Geopolitical. But "stability" can remain good only if you keep
your eyes off of the root, "stable." It means "firmly established, not likely to
change." Good only, then, if
it's your good. Not good if it's Torquemada's Spain or
Stalin's Russia, no matter how firmly they're established. Torquemada and Stalin have just as much
claim on the word as you do, American journal writers. So we need some other
word to justify going into Syria. The Economist needs it — if it's to be
superior to other journals
If the writer of the leader
doesn't use the kind of words I'm looking for, the superior words, who
does? The writer in the business
section. Yes, an accountant is
what I want. Somebody able to do a
cost-benefit analysis. Makes
realistic projections. Makes sure
that what goes on her page reflects what's in the real world. Chary of images.
I see her coming over to give some
instruction to this leader writer.
She's pretty severe.
"No, no. You can’t
talk about giving Syria 'a chance to re-emerge as a nation at peace with itself
and its neighbours' without readiness to tell your reader when that peace
was. You say re-emerge. Was there a
time when no Sunnis had to fear an Alawite massacre, when Syria was at peace
with Israel?"
But it's the editorial's last
sentence that will get her, the sentence that gives the boss (in this case the
reader) what he pays an accountant for, a solid weighing up: The sooner the
world intervenes the more lives can be saved. "What figures back that
up? What experience? Your reader is not an accountant but he can
read the news. Just today (Oct.
20, 2012), the papers tell of 'back-to-back bomb blasts in a crowded Baghdad
market near a revered Shiite shrine,' and of a 'string of shootings targeting
government officials' that killed at least 17 people. On the net he can see that in the first eight months of this
year 3,323 Iraqi civilians died by violence, about 1800 of them killed by
suicide attacks and vehicle bombs.
Markets, shrines, children's playgrounds, pilgrim's buses, were
targets. This eleven years after
an intervention for which humanitarian goals much like yours were part of the
justification. That's our
experience in the real world, and the people who pay us will expect us to take
it into account."
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